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2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: Hey Cid, I read through your application ^^ Much better then the last one you submitted but I did notice a few grammar mistakes here and there that you might want to take another look at. That is only the opinion of one writer to the next...^^
2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: Okay thanks. I need all the help I can get ^^
2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: Not a problem. If you want you can comment my application as well ^^ I too am looking for opinions!
2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: Okay I fixed the ones I could spot. Do you see anymore?
2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: Hold on a sec..I shall check ^^
2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: 'If given the chance I would try my hardest to learn as fast as I can'
I think there is something wrong with this sentance, I just don't know what...I think it should be
I will try my hardest to learn as fast as I can
or
I would try my hardest to learn as fast as I could.
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